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I dance among the stars,
Leap, underneath the beautiful moonlight
I dance all the pain away,
Every spin, every turn
Leaves the hurt behind
One step closer to happiness

Spin, turn
Pain, pain

I push forward, on and on
I follow the path the moon has lit for me
Not knowing where it will take it,
I dance,
Dance away
Away and away

I pursue my routine,
Over and over, I wont stop
I’ll never stop
It’s like a spell has been casted apon me
Dance forever, you must

Leap, leap
Good-bye pain

And the spell ever so pushes me
Go further, go further
Just  d a n c e
Point your toes, harder
Like they mounted that way

The path goes on, the starts glitter above me
Like I’m moving ahead, to a new life
A new love,  the past is no longer with me
The moonlight beams,
As I dance, dance

Spin, leap
I’m  f r e e
©2008-2010 ~dancexaway
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Maybe i feel like it sounds imcomplete.

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:icondragon260:
"apon" is spelled "upon"
I like this, if you feel this is incomplete then you could always go back to it and do more of it. It does have room to have something more in it. But it's good anyways, I like it.
:icontia404:
I think it is really well written. :) :+fav:

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:iconsandg1rl:
I like this! I would use music to escape the pain or laugh and act like a big kid to escape reality! :hug:

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My imaginary friend is my Guardian ANGEL! :floating:
:icondancexaway:
thank you.
and me too! =]

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No smile is more beautiful as one that Has struggled through tears
:icondancexaway:
thankyou =D

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No smile is more beautiful as one that Has struggled through tears
:icondancexaway:
thanks! =D i suck at spelling, i should change that XD

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No smile is more beautiful as one that Has struggled through tears
:icontia404:
you're welcome :)

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:icondancinglifeaway:
omg will you marry me?
lol
i am in love with this poem

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And once I have him hooked I'll play the one that's on his heart

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